Looking at matrix's and grids. This is starting to get me thinking about how I will lay my text spreads in my work, and how I intend for the style of my brochure to be with the collages.
We went on to a in class critique of my concepts which went well, Fay and Caroline had good feedback, some of my collages don't show cycling enough as the wheel doesn't have the spokes in it particularly in the mountain biking one.
Bring city ones more buildings - less ‘hilly’ look.
The ones with the silhouette bikes are very Mary Poppins this doesn't work that well as everything feels very up and down, the other three are stronger as a series.
The use of the tyre is strong enough to say what the activity is and does symbolise this well enough that I can work with this further.
Think and map the flavour - tone - intention - style - aesthetic of your brochure.
From this feedback I will go onto develop my collages and spreads for the next class on Thursday.
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